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Wednesday, 7 August 2019

English assessment

In the movie The Power Of One. I’m doing the scene going for a run, Pk And Gideon

In the scene where we see the aspect of long shot.


We can see PK and Gideon running and the kids are following them. 

The kids are following them because they think his the rainmaker

I was proud of getting my work started. What I need to improve on is I can describe my examples using more details.




3 comments:

  1. Good job maybe put more effort into your writing to improve on your marks.

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  2. Hello Tana. It is awesome to see that you have tried to get started.I think you could work on producing more work.An idea for next time could be working on coming up with different ideas.

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  3. Good work Tana but i think that you should put a little more effort into completing it

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